Hi Carlos! Nice job on these; you've expanded your motives nicely into some memorable melodies! While I can clearly see how your parallel and modified parallel periods are put together I'm not sure I'm fully convinced that your melodies for #2 are contrasting periods. In A, I see how you changed the melody in the consequent phrase, but I think it would be more convincing if you created greater contrast throughout the phrase rhythmically and melodically. Let me know what you think about this.
Hi Carlos! Nice job on these; you've expanded your motives nicely into some memorable melodies! While I can clearly see how your parallel and modified parallel periods are put together I'm not sure I'm fully convinced that your melodies for #2 are contrasting periods. In A, I see how you changed the melody in the consequent phrase, but I think it would be more convincing if you created greater contrast throughout the phrase rhythmically and melodically. Let me know what you think about this.
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